Here is the list of characters page. I wasn't sure what background to put in and I didn't include the cow because I think it's still being redesigned. Also, the writing is obviously not final. Let me know what you guys think or how I can improve on it. Thanks!
Cool! Some slight suggestions:
ReplyDelete-Perhaps make the Husband and Wife icons even bigger on the page than they are now, in relation to the bottom 3. Also, maybe there can be less negative space above their heads in the frame.
-Instead of "The Baby," we can put "Little Babe" (like in the story) ^_^
-Instead of The Cow and The Pig, I think we should just have it say "Cow" and "Pig," like it's their names. (I was actually going to suggest that all the placards have each of their names, but then we'd have to actually give them names and...I don't know, what do you guys think?)
Those are my thoughts. :)
cuute!
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